Thursday, February 24, 2005

Cuts from the Chase
A Fragmented Narrative
(the story of freestyle)

sometimes(:)
now(,)
causality is
not possible to determine;
the words (,are) the feeling,
the lines (,are) the meaning.

Content
content
to just

(.)be(.)

it truth
or
obscenity.

Like a painter first(,)
drawing
out the shadows,
re-enforcing
an outline.

Negatively repetitive poetic reversal(.)
hardly representative(;)

with no rehearsal

i detect the effect
before the(y) object;
shade before source.

A genetic defect i'm
the prefect of prophets
perfecting precog,
casting (for)
over the top and
inside out (for)
distribution of profits.

Now cold calling
vexin ya? Now?
dizzee with aztec
dyslexia?

let go
the future(.)
is now (.)
and then(.)

hazy.

Naw,
i'm just crazy.

3 Comments:

Blogger The Quiet Traveler said...

let me guess....a fan of ee cummings? get over yourself.

1:43 PM  
Blogger Siv said...

not even close, maybe you should read some thing you didn't get assigned in class

6:25 PM  
Blogger Siv said...

yah, the overconfident style of the blog is designed to invite insult, this is sorta like winter daycamp workshop for me, i like most people to hate me, there are of coursethe subsequent levels of annoyance possible, but truly this crap is invaluable, to me that is.

5:38 PM  

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